Tuesday, May 12, 2015

Image

My favorite kind of writing is the intricate and vivid kind. But only if it satisfies two conditions: it has to be modern and given to me in small doses. I'm sure many of us are struggling with reading Sag Harbor. It seems to stretch out much longer than Black Swan Green or The Bell Jar. Like Darren mentions in his blog post, probably because Sag Harbor is set in a much shorter time frame.

One of the things that intrigues me about Colson Whitehead's writing is the images he evokes with his writing. While reading our most recent chapter "To Prevent Flare-Ups" I noticed a few sections that stood out to me:
It was a weird black amoeba testing the edges of itself, throwing out nappy pseudopods here and suddenly there, an unpredictable new direction every day. I swear it lived, and have come to believe that its ever-shifting lumps and tendrils were a doomed attempt at communication with the humans.
Ordinary hair is described in such a vivid and colorful way. I almost pause in my reading and imagine the snake-like movement of the blob-ish amoeba. The same imagery and metaphor-like language was in The Bell Jar. I'm sure many of you don't need to read the following paragraph again because it is one of the most vivid and memorable pieces in the novel. But I wanted to revisit the imagery of the fig tree.

I saw my life branching out before me like the green fig tree in the story. From the tip of every branch, like a fat purple fig, a wonderful future beckoned and winked. One fig was a husband and a happy home and children, and another fig was a famous poet and another fig was a brilliant professor, and another fig was Ee Gee, the amazing editor, and another fig was Europe and Africa and South America, and another fig was Constantin and Socrates and Attila and a pack of other lovers with queer names and offbeat professions, and another fig was an Olympic lady crew champion, and beyond and above these figs were many more figs I couldn't quite make out. I saw myself sitting in the crotch of this fig tree, starving to death, just because I couldn't make up my mind which of the figs I would choose. I wanted each and every one of them, but choosing one meant losing all the rest, and, as I sat there, unable to decide, the figs began to wrinkle and go black, and, one by one, they plopped to the ground at my feet. 

 Although different in substance and image than the passage from Sag Harbor, I still imagined the fig tree winding slowly up and displaying all of Esther's potential futures. In my mind it was alive and movie-like.

How do you read passages rich with images? Does it pay like a movie in your head?

1 comment:

  1. I also really like some of Whitehead's imagery. It can be very creative. The scene you have written up there about Benji's hair really reminds me of the scene where Benji imagines the cold seeping out of the freezer as he leaves the door open overnight. I think tendrils are mentioned there too; that's probably why. You mentioned that it can be difficult to get through Sag Harbor. I think another reason for this might be that it jumps around so much. Benji has all these tangents (which aren't bad, I think, but) which make the actual plot-line difficult to follow.

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